大奉–滁州城

卖鲍这个切入写的不好,也不用加很多笔墨

在一个月后给老百姓招魂时,用一个朝夕相处的小故事就好,也不用加什么江湖侠客,就是使团和当地人接触,朝夕相处了半个月,然后正聊天或干什么,人突然涣散,然后再引出全城变化最后得知真像

卖鲍这写的跟小孩似的

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